-Recognise how many tens and hundreds are in numbers.
Here is my work.
Welcome to my blog, I am a learner at Greymouth High School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’
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Pets Are Great
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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I strongly believe that having pets is a really great thing!
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
-argument
-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, Pets are extremely great for people with disabilities! For example, guide dogs help their owner (who is blind ) to walk around places by leading them around. Guide dogs (or hearing dogs) also help people that are deaf or find it hard to hear. Hearing dogs are specially trained to alert their owner if there is an emergency or an everyday sound such as a doorbell. The dog will nudge their owner and lead them to the source or to safety.
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Secondly, Pets are extremely helpful for people that are lonely or have depression! People that are lonely normally have a pet to keep them company. For example, if you have depression your pet will cheer you up.
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Thirdly, pets are great for doing jobs. Dogs work in the police force to find things and to find people. For example, dogs pick up a scent of a person and go to find them. At the airport dogs sniff bags for anything bad. For example, when I went to the international airport a dog came up to us and sniffed our bags.
Finally, pets are good for warning people about medical conditions. Pets can detect if you have cancer or if you are about to have an epileptic fit. if you are about to have a stroke or if you have diabetes and you are high in sugar. Experts train dogs to sniff diseases or medical conditions.
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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In conclusion, I think that people should have pets because they are extremely great for blind and deaf people, pets are really helpful for people that are depressed. Pets are great for doing jobs and are extremely good for sniffing out medical conditions. It is extremely important for people to have pets.
By Sasha
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Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great hākinakina (sport))’
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Fix Our Field
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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I strongly believe that we need fix our whira (field) NOW! My reasons are that the whira (field) is constantly muddy, the court and playground are getting too crowded, without the whira (field) we can’t train for hākinakina (sporting) events and we can’t hold special events. These are the reasons our whira (field) needs to be fixed NOW!
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
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-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, we need to fix the whira (field) because the whira (field) is constantly muddy. When the whira (field) is muddy no one can go on it and if you do your shoe gets stuck! There are also a lot of mud holes so you have to watch where you step. For example, when you are having a running race you sometimes will trip up.
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Secondly, the court and the playground are getting far too crowded! Everyone is crowded in the playground and on the court. For example, people are getting injuries from falling over on the concrete and getting hit with P.E equipment.
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Thirdly, without a whira (field) we can’t train for hākinakina (sports) events! No one can train for hākinakina (sport) events such as: cross country, soccer, rugby and more. At karoro wharekura (school) we like hākinakina (sport)s and we have to go somewhere else to train. For example, the rippa rugby team has to train on the court instead of the whira (field)!
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Finally, we can’t hold special events. Now we can’t hold the gala, have a hangi or have a family fun night! The gala helps us fundraise money for the wharekura (school). Now there won’t be as much money for shows, busses and other things.
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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In conclusion we need to fix our whira (field) because the whira (field) is too muddy, the playground and court is too crowded, we can’t train for hākinakina (sports) events and we can’t hold special events. It is important to have a good whira (field) at wharekura (school)!
BY SASHA.
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