Hi, I like your work. I really like how you have added photos to your work, because it give me a better idear on what that part of your work is about. Your poem is really cool as well, because it has a good rhyme to it and it soonds cool as well. It would be nice if you also included the success criteria in your work. thanks David.
Kia Ora Sasha and Summer I enjoyed reading your work. I enjoyed your poem and how it had a good rthym. The rythm kept it altoghther. I also enjoyed how you backed your answers up with pictures like on slide 3 you gave me a fair idea of what a crop is. I learnt that they find places to stay easily and that they have a hard coat to protect them. I think next time you could explain how your super insect can suivive in it's habitate easer. I think next time you could use a little more colour. Kia pai From Billie
Kia ora Sasha. I like your work around 'Te Aitanga Pepeke'. I especially like your poem. It really suits the topic! It reminds me of a rhyming book I used to read when I was really little. I also like your 'Flimaflider". It would certainly survive in the New Zealand native bush for a long time! Your layout is clear and easy to read. Good Job! From Rebekah.
Hi, I like your work. I really like how you have added photos to your work, because it give me a better idear on what that part of your work is about. Your poem is really cool as well, because it has a good rhyme to it and it soonds cool as well. It would be nice if you also included the success criteria in your work. thanks David.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your work. I enjoyed your poem and how it had a good rthym. The rythm kept it altoghther. I also enjoyed how you backed your answers up with pictures like on slide 3 you gave me a fair idea of what a crop is. I learnt that they find places to stay easily and that they have a hard coat to protect them. I think next time you could explain how your super insect can suivive in it's habitate easer. I think next time you could use a little more colour.
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Kia ora Sasha. I like your work around 'Te Aitanga Pepeke'. I especially like your poem. It really suits the topic! It reminds me of a rhyming book I used to read when I was really little. I also like your 'Flimaflider". It would certainly survive in the New Zealand native bush for a long time! Your layout is clear and easy to read. Good Job!
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