Hi Sasha. I really like your Magic Box poem. I also like how you added some Te Reo Maori in you work. Next time you could add some more alliteration. From Mackenzie.
Hi Sasha, I liked your poem, because it was interesting to read, because it made me laugh at some bits. I thought it was funny when you said that you would put an ice cream in a box because it will melt. Next time you could add some more alliteration.
Kia ora Sasha! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I really liked your Magic box poem because it has lots of detail! Maybe next time you could make your size 24 or bigger so we can read it! Did you have fun making your magic box poem? He whetu koe! (Your a star!)
Hi Sasha. I really like your Magic Box poem. I also like how you added some Te Reo Maori in you work. Next time you could add some more alliteration.
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Kia ora Mackenzie. Its Sasha here. Thank you for your kind, positive and helpful comment.
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ReplyDeleteI liked your poem, because it was interesting to read, because it made me laugh at some bits.
I thought it was funny when you said that you would put an ice cream in a box because it will melt.
Next time you could add some more alliteration.
Kia ora Zoe. Its Sasha here. Thank you for commenting on my Magic Box poem.
DeleteKia ora Sasha! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I really liked your Magic box poem because it has lots of detail! Maybe next time you could make your size 24 or bigger so we can read it! Did you have fun making your magic box poem? He whetu koe! (Your a star!)
ReplyDeleteHi Katelynn. Its Sasha here from Karoro School. Yes I did have fun making my magic box poem. Thank you for your comment.
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